sick
its pretty ill man - defintally good to rave to ( dance ) or watever... i like the opening
im not acusing you, but this sound similar to a known song... i just cant think of it ( the opening )
but yeah, good work, keep it up.
( your other song is ill to, but this ones beter )
Thats the problem with hardstyle the melodies are different but the note order and timing in 3rds is a common hardstyle cliche... but it wouldnt be hardstyle if the melodies and beats didnt play at 3rds :P. And Please let me know which song you think it sounds similar to because i'de like to hear it... I didn't use any songs as reference when making this it was all done on the spot :). anyways i'm glad you liked the song :D
its pretty sick
opened nice --- fuckin scream!
sick
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id love the full version of this, its perfect for a track ive got goin right now.
beautiful
think im gunna hit open mic wit this man - ill rep your name - and link
freedyfingger right?
Sure, go ahead. I'd like to hear it too!
Yo SUCk
your not better then shit - dont even commit
to anymore lyrics - you bitch
your the fool im
drown you in a pool
after i publicly embars you at your school
im the king at throne im dah one that rules - im in control
an console online in game consoles -
globaly i got the right of these lyrical jewls - im rich rippted on truley fit
killin bloods - and stompin crips
each letter defines a stitch - designed in line in rymbe alligned and combined spirtuality within the devine - as worlds colides - i bind my my mind
and reach a reality climb - and break through the oceans tides - and fly past crimson skys - in the universe inwhich im intergalacticaly inclined to rise past the prime - and shine - through the right of my pride. - - flow so sly
im raps god - and ill never die
Ya, so I went to your profile and I checked out some of your tunes. They're pretty good.
And for the record, this is called a JOKE. learn it. bitch.
...
im a hip hop artist...
i listen to metal and rock
haha i think its hularious...
i laugh at all the hip hop shit on new grounds. so i came to this to do review..
this is the first ive listened to..
and i dont think ill hear anything better...
well done...
is this you playing?
or did u make it with a program.. beacuse u are gifted...
REspectable.
Lots of potential - good singing voice - good love song.
good beat.
the filter u got rockin on your voice. u need to edit. to much echo - room effet...
could be much better
defintly give u.. a 2
haha jk 7 - fix it and its worth 9
second rapper - is good good flow
we'll try to take out the echos next time and work on the flows of the first rapper (steve) but he has gotten better over the years. but anyways, thanks for the review man, peace!!!
KLZ
Jersey Endless
HJAHAHAHAH
1 for the beat - the rest was.... modern shit.. like a rapper wit no lyrics
no offense.. but your beond past tense - missed the bus yet ur still on the bench
ur a joke - a smoe so keep your jerk squirtin lyrics to your self...
erotick powwow - your worse then bow wow - lyricaly bound
to your daily jerk count
you should dismount - then remount - to a different sound- cuz u just knocked ur self out in round one - in the washroom haven to much fun - wit ur finger in your bum - wiggle wiggle twist twist - dribble dribble cum - -
your fathers probly proud of his gay son
- ill give you some cash , just get your fist out a yo ass
from the facts seems like your on crack - slap to porn tracks
u anit gettin contratcs - but ull meet contact - with this lyrical gat
bitch you just got cappt - im verbaly strapped - wit much hooks on my back
ur wack - YEAH i said wack, i can dumb it down like that - cuz you aint shit
so just quit! --- and i wrote this in under 2minutes... while i listened to ur terrible song.
You know, throughout the entire song, we didn't say "faggot" or "gay" once so I think we're already unlike most modern rappers out there... Kinda like your shit. Check yourself before you check others man, your stuff is weak, for real.
But to each their own... Thanks for the review.
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